Notepad: Stage 2 - On Screen Critique

Today in class we took our pdf of the notepads and put them up on screen so the class could critique them. This is the notepad that I have created and displayed for the critique.

Improves:

 *Even White Space around the QR code

*The Blog address is repetitive as the QR code takes the viewer there.

*Designer would be better on the same line as Jacub Bruning so it will center on the address

(C) Boy, thinking bubbles, JB Graphics Logo, were created by Jacub Bruning in Adobe Illustrator CS5.

Notepad: Stage 1- Sketches

Our project is a self advertising 5X7 notepad. Here are my sketches and roughs.
The Audience is any potential clients.
The purpose is to promote myself as an illustrator and designer. 
The call to action is to get the client or potential employer interested in me and my work.

Sketches 1-10

My 2 roughs